(and with apologies to fellow New Jersey native William Carlos Williams)
This is just to say
that I am sorry I blew
those dandelions across your lawn
It is just that they
were so tempting,
six silver spheres swaying on slender stems
How
could I resist?
They called to me each day for a week, dancing
atop their slim stalks in the sun
pleading to be strewn, set free
And so I did
tromp across your
(meticulously groomed but for their presence) grass
plucking
one after the other
sending them scattering with a wish and a breath
Forgive me for spreading those seeds of the sunniest of weeds
across your emerald expanse
(Though it isn't as though I stomped on your spirea or plundered your pachysandra)
Truth be told, I am far more sorry
to have been surprised, mid-blow, too far off the sidewalk to pretend innocence
by your garage door opening, heralding your early return home
than by the crime itself
Now, I wonder, when you pass by as I wait
for the school bus on the corner
in front of your house
will you still wave?
13 comments:
Ha! I was thinking about that the other day: how in childhood the blowing of dandelions is magical and sweet, but once you're in Homeowner-Land they're like kryptonite.
over from SITS!!!
adorable poem. love dandelions and blowing them. how could you resist!!!
Hi, here from SITS. Ahhh to have the pleasure of summer again. Dandelions or not, it's a far better time for me than 19 degrees!
Well said! Busted! Have fun today. ;-)
Great Post as usual!
Great poem, I love it! I too have trouble resisting temptation ;)So...do they wave? Found you on SITS.
Oh, I love blowing dandelions. Yeah, do they still wave or pretend not to see you?
Dandelions are made for blowin'! That's just how it is!
Neighbors are made for...um...ignoring? Maybe that's just my 'hood.
Wonderful post, as always...
:^) Anna
uh- that's what dandelions are for!! they can't be pissed! unless they were saving them to ripen to perfect blowingness to blow themselves, in which case, you owe them new dandelions! but a pinwheel would probably do
I love that you were busted!! That totally sounds like something I would do!! hee hee hee!
BUSTED....but it sounded totally worth it...I mean...with all the temptation!
I'm here from SITS, and I loved your version of one of my favorite poems. I had even blogged that poem once
http://katydidandkid.blogspot.com/2008/06/plum-inspired-poetry.html
Heh!! I loved your poem!
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